From owner-sc35wg4+sc35wg4-domo=www.open-std.org@open-std.org Fri Mar 9 05:13:53 2012 Return-Path: X-Original-To: sc35wg4-domo Delivered-To: sc35wg4-domo@www.open-std.org Received: by www.open-std.org (Postfix, from userid 521) id 1746735698C; Fri, 9 Mar 2012 05:13:53 +0100 (CET) Delivered-To: sc35wg4@open-std.org Received: from rap.rap.dk (0x5551165b.adsl.cybercity.dk [85.81.22.91]) by www.open-std.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A835E356687 for ; Fri, 9 Mar 2012 05:13:51 +0100 (CET) Received: by rap.rap.dk (Postfix, from userid 500) id 3E23E27DE; Fri, 9 Mar 2012 05:13:51 +0100 (CET) X-Greylist: delayed 4310 seconds by postgrey-1.34 at www5.open-std.org; Fri, 09 Mar 2012 01:49:28 CET Received: from venus2.jsa.or.jp (venus2.jsa.or.jp [61.117.214.198]) by www.open-std.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8B05E35696F; Fri, 9 Mar 2012 01:49:27 +0100 (CET) Received: from gemini-d2.net.jsa.or.jp ([172.16.1.29]) by venus2.jsa.or.jp (Post.Office MTA v4.0.1.1 release 20070724 ID# 5002-024U600L600S0V40J) with ESMTP id jp; Fri, 9 Mar 2012 08:37:34 +0900 Received: from Perseus3.jsa.or.jp (perseus.jsa.or.jp) by gemini-d2.net.jsa.or.jp (Clearswift SMTPRS 5.2.9) with ESMTP id ; Fri, 9 Mar 2012 08:36:29 +0900 X-AuditID: ac100110-b7c25ae000001edb-28-4f5942be456e Received: from 0804A008CA (planet.jsa.or.jp [172.16.1.1]) by Perseus3.jsa.or.jp (Symantec Brightmail Gateway) with SMTP id 16.54.07899.EB2495F4; Fri, 9 Mar 2012 08:37:34 +0900 (JST) From: "Hiroaki Ikeda" To: "'Andy Heath'" Cc: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?'Alain_LaBont=E9'?= , , , References: <20120229034257.97BBD9DB114@www.open-std.org> <20120306155520.76861356945@www.open-std.org> <20120306220605.23A7F356941@www.open-std.org> <4F56BDDB.1060706@axelrod.plus.com> <20120307124800.20BBA356945@www.open-std.org> <20120307181203.148263569A2@www.open-std.org> <20120308221932.D342B3569A2@www.open-std.org> Subject: RE: (SC35WG1.330) (SC35WG4.14) WD 17549 (4-direction devices) English Question Date: Fri, 9 Mar 2012 08:37:29 +0900 Message-ID: <94368F45BD624E59B6E8DBA8F1F48E3F@net.jsa.or.jp> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Mailer: Microsoft Office Outlook 11 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2900.6157 Thread-Index: Acz9eY+pRIoPHvkBTGihw9cVoO8XYgAClygg In-Reply-To: <20120308221932.D342B3569A2@www.open-std.org> X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAA== Sender: owner-sc35wg4@open-std.org Precedence: bulk Dear Andy, Thank you very much for your efforts of improving English. Please kindky review the Annex A for English improving. Tomorrow I will meet the co-editor over the Skype for further overall action. With best regards, Hiroaki IKEDA -----Original Message----- From: owner-sc35wg1@open-std.org [mailto:owner-sc35wg1@open-std.org] On Behalf Of Andy Heath Sent: Friday, March 09, 2012 7:19 AM To: Andy Heath Cc: Alain LaBont=E9; sc35wg4@open-std.org; jaeil@nia.or.kr; sc35wg1@open-std.org Subject: (SC35WG1.330) (SC35WG4.14) WD 17549 (4-direction devices) = English Question Dear Professor Ikeda, does the Annex. A. need reviewing for English "improving" ? Or should this be left alone as a document from an external source ? Kind regards andy > In the attached I've reviewed the english as requested and made=20 > extensive editorial modifications and comments. Almost all of the=20 > modifications are entirely editorial with just the odd one or two=20 > where I've suggested a small semantic change. > > In many cases I wasn't clear what was intended and so I commented to=20 > that effect and in some cases suggested several alternatives from=20 > which one can be selected. In some places I could make no sense at all = > of a few sentences so there was nothing I could do with it - in those=20 > cases I'm happy to review again and supply english text if some=20 > clarification of meaning can be made and the document marked up in=20 > some way so I can find them. > > I haven't yet tackled Annex A because I'm not sure of its context and=20 > whether its ok to modify it - if its text taken from some external=20 > study then is it ok to make modifications ? > > I hope this helps and am happy to look again at clarified parts=20 > identified to need a further look and also the Annex if its = appropriate. > > Cheers > > andy Cheers andy -- __________________ Andy Heath http://axelafa.com