From owner-sc35wg4+sc35wg4-domo=www.open-std.org@open-std.org Tue Mar 6 16:55:19 2012 Return-Path: X-Original-To: sc35wg4-domo Delivered-To: sc35wg4-domo@www.open-std.org Received: by www.open-std.org (Postfix, from userid 521) id ADD3035692D; Tue, 6 Mar 2012 16:55:19 +0100 (CET) Delivered-To: sc35wg4@open-std.org Received: from mail-ww0-f53.google.com (mail-ww0-f53.google.com [74.125.82.53]) by www.open-std.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BF5AB35692D; Tue, 6 Mar 2012 16:55:18 +0100 (CET) Received: by wgbfm10 with SMTP id fm10so3010911wgb.22 for ; Tue, 06 Mar 2012 07:55:17 -0800 (PST) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of andyheathaxelrod@googlemail.com designates 10.180.79.231 as permitted sender) client-ip=10.180.79.231; Authentication-Results: mr.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of andyheathaxelrod@googlemail.com designates 10.180.79.231 as permitted sender) smtp.mail=andyheathaxelrod@googlemail.com; dkim=pass header.i=andyheathaxelrod@googlemail.com Received: from mr.google.com ([10.180.79.231]) by 10.180.79.231 with SMTP id m7mr11665984wix.11.1331049317860 (num_hops = 1); Tue, 06 Mar 2012 07:55:17 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlemail.com; s=20120113; h=sender:message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject :references:in-reply-to:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=3D0LNhkES1xnrYrVpGLpF1RFiXSM9o4ERYbkcp7Yzl8=; b=UjfUG7yUyRKitZ3BVh2ok2M5CukyxwHgTP6LMuSt5tQU30ZKfnB1/1Y1lfjxcC+m4Q ZBy3FoKT2Ola2QWnIa3VifuEQS0Hem6yJZ9jv8AbbraVlh6W3x/wTS+1bBohxRpWt8H2 rqI5AWnW38kIaCeymWWQCPXKLWqlzr/rJ9CVTFTcK/g6a8qh9tiJFxJYZYJp20tRU6R3 TZyKsGIJFjkM2vaTQbwVuso8Td2mANgjwV/bJPh7rCAnnRlzeVK5+nzU2IptgoB8dyx4 5SAAx3cilFycAAFC7bcOyTCoKtoCXZPw7GR8vTn1sYOO1dUIzHgHjcgUN+cBQ13OVCcd OvHA== Received: by 10.180.79.231 with SMTP id m7mr9188694wix.11.1331049317809; Tue, 06 Mar 2012 07:55:17 -0800 (PST) Received: from andysmacbook.localdomain (axelrod.plus.com. [81.174.245.58]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id 9sm80611369wid.2.2012.03.06.07.55.12 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Tue, 06 Mar 2012 07:55:13 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <4F56335F.8040600@axelrod.plus.com> Date: Tue, 06 Mar 2012 15:55:11 +0000 From: Andy Heath User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.7; rv:10.0.2) Gecko/20120216 Thunderbird/10.0.2 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: ikeda@faculty.chiba-u.jp CC: sc35wg1@open-std.org, sc35wg4@open-std.org, jaeil@nia.or.kr Subject: Re: (SC35WG4.4) Reviced WD 17549 (4-direction devices) References: <20120229034257.97BBD9DB114@www.open-std.org> In-Reply-To: <20120229034257.97BBD9DB114@www.open-std.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-sc35wg4@open-std.org Precedence: bulk I'm just reviewing the English in this as I was requested to do and immediately I hit a slight snag. The title is not good English. I don't know if the title can be changed without a resolution but I propose a number of alternatives: 1. Guidelines on navigation methods for selecting in menus with 4-direction devices 2. Guidelines on navigation methods for selection in menus with 4-direction devices 3. Guidelines on navigation methods for selection menus with 4-direction devices My preference is 3. but perhaps this changes the meaning slightly ? andy > Dear members of WG 1 and WG 4 of JTC 1/SC 35 > > As agreed at the joint meeting of WG 1 and WG 4 held in Kyoto on 2012-02 > -22, let me send as attached, worked result for your review no later > than 2012-03-15. > > Andy is kindly asked to improve "English" used in the WD. > > With kind regards, > > Hiroaki IKEDA > Project editor Cheers andy -- __________________ Andy Heath http://axelafa.com